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Hi! My name is Abigail, I want to glorify the Lord in everything I do.
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Writing Workshop Lesson 3
Character: Starla Johnson
Physical traits: Gray eyes Long black hair and Pointed ears
Personality Traits: Loses temper Often And True to her Friends She is Confident in what she does and is Responsible
Likes/Dislikes: Likes chewing gum Loves Drawing Likes her Dog Sparky. Likes Her Friends Danyl And Hannah. |
Posted: 10:06 AM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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yeah it's been way to long!
i have been sick this week...what did u do? |
Posted by dancerocks101 at 11:25 AM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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the movie was fab!
i am on like 5 sites right now
hsb
youtube
webkinz
club penguin
and my email |
Posted by dancerocks101 at 11:36 AM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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| ok cool! i am in the pink zone |
Posted by dancerocks101 at 11:43 AM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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Lesson 3
You are creating characters for a story you may want to write sometime, right? Starla is a lovely name. Good choice! I'm wondering what you mean by "pointed ears" (is she an elf, or are her ears just kind of pointy?). When I read "pointed ears" I thought "elf; fantasy story." Is this what you wanted to tell readers?
I would like to see you add just a couple more things to her personality traits, so I can get to know her a little better. Otherwise, nice start! |
Posted by skmarlow at 12:16 PM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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I'm glad you like the workshop. And thanks for clearing up about Starla. :-)
oops! I signed this as my SuzyScribbles account. Oh, well...I'm sure you know who I am by now.
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Posted by SuzyScribbles at 1:20 PM, Jan. 19, 2008 |
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