• Jan. 26, 2008
Writing workshop lesson 8

Character:Danyl
Setting:A Starry Hill top
Danyl Gazed up at the Bright Moon. She Shivered at the thought of  being there Alone. She Glanced over at her Friend Hannah. "You Scared?" Hannah Asked. Danyl nodded. "But just think." Hannah said. "Starla brings the police, They arrest Bill and Marv, We go home!" Danyl Smiled but wasn't completely Convinced.

Comments

• Jan. 26, 2008
Lesson 8

Posted by skmarlow

"She shivered at the thought of being alone." Great imagery here, Abby. I could see them huddled together. Good job. It doesn't have to be lengthy to paint a picture. Sometimes only a few words in the right place. :-)

Oh, I fixed the Lesson 9 problem. I had the wrong link for it. Try it now. If there's another problem, let me know!
THanks!

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• Jan. 28, 2008
Cool Blog!

Posted by kyndal12

Hey! You have a cool blog!

Talk to ya later!

-Kyndal12 (P.S. check out my blog! I bet it's not as cool as yours though!)

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