Mar. 3, 2008 - ??????????
This is a Song, not a poem, although, I suppose it could be a poem too, that's just not what I wrote it to be. I suck at thinking up names for my stuff, so, help again, please, oh, by the way, I decided to call my poem "Illusion" thanks Sydney!!!!
(Piano plays for a little while)
Verse One:
(Slow, sad melody)
I am terrified
I am bleeding
I want to hide
Inside I am screaming
(Music begins to turn into a metal song)
Bridge:
This can't go on much longer
By giving in
I'm only making you stronger
(Music begins to turn into a heavy metal song)
Chorus:
Too long I've wasted in helpless silence
No more will I lay down and take this
Too long I've endured this violence
No more will I stay in this dark abyss
(Song softens up)
(Same piano tune, just a little less quiet)
Verse Two:
(Slow, sad melody again, only slightly louder)
I'm worn out
I'm crying
I want to shout
Inside I am dying
(Music turns into more a metal song, again.)
Bridge:
This can't go on much longer
By giving in
I'm only making you stronger
(Music turns into a more heavy metal song, again.)
Chorus:
Too long I've wasted in helpless silence
No more will I lay down and take this
Too long I've endured this violence
No more will I stay in this dark abyss
(Heavy metal fades to a light tune, and piano plays to fade.)
I know it may sound stupid to you, but it my head, it sound amazing! So, just tell me what you think, thanks a lot! : )
*~Isabella~*
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