Ruth: Part 1
Posted by Kirsty on Oct. 10, 2005 @ 7:57 PM
I have decided to do my story like a journal.
So I'm going to write one entry each day.
Here's the first one.......
Dear Diary,
Today, just out of the blue, Elimelech came to me and told me we were moving. I was mad/confused by
the news but not nearly as upset as when he told me where we were moving.
To Moab! He actually said we're going to Moab! Maybe I should explain why I'm so upset. The Moabite people are very wicked, they worship idols and pagan gods. Just thinking about the fact that I am going to have to live there with my family, makes me furious! Why would God do this to me? Do I deserve this kind of treatment? I am still praying that God will change my husband's mind. But it truly is impossible, I have the most stubborn husband in the whole world.
I wanted to yell at him so badly, to try to talk some sense into him. I am convinced he has gone mad! This drought must be doing something to his brain.
But as mad as I am at him, I cannot argue with his decision. The worst part is he wants to move tomorrow! None of Mahlon and Chilion's clothes are even clean
so I have to do laundry and pack everything by tomorrow.
Oh, I don't know if I'll live through this move.
I better start packing.
Your distressed friend,
Naomi
~So what did you think about it so far?
~Please let me know.
Kirsty
WOw!
MsByn left this comment on Oct. 11, 2005 at 2:16 PM
Absolutely AMAZING and fantastic! You are quite the writer! You really captured the emotion and feelings... and the "human-ness" of the situation. Wow. It made me want to read more... please keep posting.Untitled Comment
drewsfamilytx left this comment on Oct. 11, 2005 at 8:24 PM
Very interesting! I'm curious to see how her move goes tomorrow. :-)That's a very neat idea. I'll have to keep that type of writing in mind when it comes to my children...
God bless you,
Marsha
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MissSprite left this comment on Oct. 12, 2005 at 6:03 PM
It's awesome, Kirsty! I wish that I could do that good at that kind of thing.I think it is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
laurenkjoyce left this comment on Oct. 12, 2005 at 7:16 PM
I'm a friend of MissSprite and in her blog she mentioned you so I decided to come and say hi. I think your Ruth journal is splendid so far! Good Luck with it!!!!Tomorrow the 13 I'm posting a part of a story on my blog. So hopefully that works out too.
until later
cya, lauren
Ruth
Cat left this comment on Oct. 15, 2005 at 6:04 AM
It's pretty cool so far. I like the part at the end about the kids clothes. That sounds like a mom. LOLHave you ever written stories before?
Cat