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Jul. 7, 2008
Just a Poem

     A couple of months ago, on a whim, I entered a poetry contest  I was rather hesitant at the time, because I'd never entered a poetry contest before, and because I'd never written in blank verse before. But, (with my mom's encouragement), I decided to try it, and, then a few days ago, I found out that I received an honorable mention!  Anyway, to shorten a lengthy story, I decided to post it here. Hope you enjoy!


Another War

Inside the car he sat and gazed alone.

The train was roaring, people chatting, but

The clamor could not pierce his thoughts that flew

Ahead to reach his journey’s end. He sighed.

“Been here before?” A voice said from behind.

His head jerked ‘round—the voice rasped out a laugh.

“I didn’t mean to scare ya, soldier boy,”

 (For soldier boy he was), “rest easy, see?”

The solder looked and saw the aging man

Who spoke, and blushing slightly, smiled a bit.

“Old habits die hard.” said he with a shrug.

The old man’s eyes were knowing. “That they do.” 

“So, where ya headin’? Do ya know this place?”

The soldier turned back in his seat. “I did.”

He answered briefly. Undeterred, his new

Acquaintance tried again.“ Ya got a home?”

“A fam’ly or a sweetheart watin’ here?”

The soldier drew a breath and closed his eyes.

“Not here. Not anymore.” was all he said.

A lull ensued; the whistle wailed. Again,

The soldier spoke. “ You know, it’s not what I

Had planned when over there. Thought I’d come home

And leave the war behind, but now. . .”  He paused.

“Another war is waiting for me here.”

“It’s diff’rent, but the same.”  The train was still.

The other trav’lers vanished, but the men

Remained in silence. The old man stretched out

His hand.  “May God be with you as you fight.”

The soldier grasped the hand, “He always is,”

And strode away to face his battle ground.

 

 

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Jul. 7, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Grace4God
Hi Kori!
Thanks for commenting...I'm sorry I haven't been by... :) Good gravy, it's just hard to get everything done! I'm almost looking forward to starting school again...at least then I'll have some semblence of a schedule!
I loved the poem...very, very good writing! Very neat idea, as well! Thanks for sharing!
In Christ,
Grace



Jul. 8, 2008 - Awsome poem

Posted by 1ofhis
Great poem, amazing writing!

In Him,
-Nina



Jul. 9, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Bekka
Ahhhh, that was really good. :)



Jul. 10, 2008 - Awesome!

Posted by Christi
Wow! That was awesome! And you know I absoulutely abhore most poetry...so you should feel very honored! Thanks for commenting on my blog girl! I wish we actually had time to sit down and talk in person! Thanks for the verse though, it was sooo encouraging!



Jul. 11, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by CountryKell
Thank you for the comment. It was helpful. And I liked the poetry, your very talented. You'll have to put some more up, I enjoyed reading it.



Jul. 12, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by GraceElizabeth
Wow, that is really very good! I can sense such a long story behind it. I've never tried free verse before, but I always thought it would be fun!

I'm glad you liked my review on PC. I agree with you on the Lewis one-liners that they left out. I always loved those!

~Grace



Jul. 16, 2008 - a note from Rose

Posted by Rose
Hello Kori,
Thank you for the comment. Your blog is lovely! And if you don't mind, I shall add you.

That was a very nice poem, congratulations on the honorable mention! I was also reading some of your older posts, and the one about quoting Aslan really caught my eye. I do the same thing, and your favorite quote is one of mine as well. I really liked how they had Aslan say the same thing to Lucy in Prince Caspian. It seemed to fit well.

Thank you for the comment.
Love to hear from you,
Rebekah Rose



Jul. 17, 2008 - Poem

Posted by lovedbyGod
Great job!! I loved the poem. And thanks for getting me started, I had fun.



Jul. 17, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by magg93
Greetings,
I must say that I really like your blog...may I add you as a friend?
Have a Blessed Day!
Maggie



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