Breaking news…. Katie was entered in an essay contest sponsored by our local electric cooperative. The co-op covers a five-county area, and all the schools in those counties were invited to participate. The seven best essays were invited to compete orally tonight at a banquet. The three top scorers overall (essay, oral presentation, knowledge of rural electrical co-op trivia) would each win an all-expense paid trip to Washington DC in June.
Katie had been told she should have her essay memorized, although she could use note cards if needed. She spent QUITE a bit of time in the past couple weeks memorizing her four-page essay; it was 10 minutes long.
Fifteen minutes before we left the house to go to the competition, Katie came into my office looking just a tiny bit flustered. "Mom, I feel really dumb, but I just re-read the competition rules and found out that I only have three minutes to present my essay. Could you help me figure out what to cut?" Fun, fun, fun.
I advised her, and she began scratching off note cards. While it was easy to take paragraphs out, it was hard to get the thing to "flow" with so many omiussions. In the car, she practiced while Scott timed her.
Katie was the fifth of the seven to do her thing, and she really shone. Even though I am her mom, I can honestly say that her delivery was much, much better than the other students’. She only glanced down at her notes once. She used emotion, had great eye contact, varied her intonation, spoke clearly, and was a delight to listen to. Even though she stumbled briefly over a quite which she couldn’t remember, she simply smiled, said apologetically, "Oh well, I forgot it," and kept right on going. We were all SO proud of her!
After each presentation, the judges asked the student one question. Katie’s essay had to do with the discovery of penicillin, so the question she received from judge Stan Bess, VP of the Vacation Channel, was (more or less) "What do you think is the most important medical challenge facing humanity today?" Katie thought a moment and said, "Medicine is not really my field of expertise; history is, but I would say finding a cure for cancer…" People laughed and Mr. Bess commented on what a great job she had done.
I breathed a sigh of relief that she had not only gotten through it with so many last minute changes, but that she had done so well. There was one really interesting thing. Of the seven finalists, five attend public school and two are homeschooled. Katie’s essay dealt with penicillin, and Aaron’s (the other homeschooler) was about Benedict Arnold. ALL FIVE of the other essays dealt with blacks and women. In fact, several of them said the same things in the same ways – even using the same wording. It let me see what is being emphasized to public school students.
When the winners were anounced – in no particular order, which drove Scott nuts - Katie was one of the three! She will be traveling to Washington, DC with some 80 other students from Missouri. There will be a total of some 1300 students on this trip nationwide. We are quite excited for her. Thanks especially to all who prayed for her speech memorization.