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Part 2
Old Polydore brought the boy home to his wife who shared in her husband’s great joy in the lad. They called him Mordred, the luck-child of the village, and all the fisher-women doted upon him. But as he grew older, and shunned their company, the women began to say he was ill-favored and feisty. The older he got the more disliked other people, especially the other children that were his age. He even ignored his adapted parents as much as he could. It soon became apparent that he had only one friend in the whole world: Naman. His parents were even more distressed by this, for they thought it was the friendship with Naman that made Mordred so unfriendly. And also what parent would want their son to be friends with a wizard? One day ten-year old Mordred sat on a stool up high in the opening of Naman’s cave, overlooking the little fishing village. Naman stood a bit farther in stirring a pot of soup that hung over the open fire. “Who were my real parents, Naman?”
“I don’t know my boy.”
“Are you really a wizard like the fishers say, or is it one of there usual lies?”
“I’m not a wizard. But I am a descendent of the druids. The people down there remember that and in their minds I have been twisted into a wizard.”
“You are a druid, Naman?”
“I’m not, myself, but my ancestors were. There are few druids left, but those few are still important forces in Logres. The great Merlin himself was a druid.”
“Will you tell me a story, Naman?”
“How about the tale of old King Lear, who was king of Logres long before the coming of the Roman invaders or the Saxon raiders?”
“Yes, yes! I love that story! It is so sad and yet so real. Many of your others do not always seem so real. They always have happy endings.”
“Alright. Once, a thousand years ago lived the good King Lear. He had three daughters….”
It would have been an odd sight if any stranger had come upon them. The thin, gray bearded, old man bending over the fire stirring his soup with a long pole and the small dark haired boy sitting on stool listening to him tell his tale. Not the usual picture of an evil necromancer. Mordred spent all his free time thus until he was twelve years old. Though he was very friendly and tame when with Naman, he always avoided speaking to anyone else even old Polydore and his wife. The village boys, once they found that Mordred shunned their company, teased and baited him without mercy whenever they got the chance. One evening, as Mordred was coming down from Naman’s cave, after sharing supper with the old man, they made at him with sticks and stones and one or two threw buckets of water on him. Mordred turned on them furiously, and being bigger and stronger than they, beat them back with his fists. Several of the boys were badly hurt and they retreated, letting Mordred continue his way home in peace. That night Mordred and Polydore went out fishing and Polydore did not hear of the encounter until the morning. While Polydore was eating his breakfast after taking a short sleep, several of the fishermen came to him complaining of their sons injuries. They demanded that they keep Mordred away from that “evil enchanter” who they claimed had egged Mordred into attacking their boys. So after breakfast, while he and Mordred were outside their hut mending nets, he told Mordred that he must not go to visit Naman anymore. Mordred made no answer, but as soon as the nets were repaired, he got up to go to Naman’s as usual. As he started away, Polydore leapt up angrily and seized him by the shoulders and shook him. Mordred turned around, furious, and struck him a hard blow in the head. But it was harder than he intended, for he didn’t know his strength. Polydore reeled backward and fell like stone. Mordred kneeled over him. He was dead. Mordred stood up and looked around. A small was running towards one of the houses, screaming. The chase would be on in a minute. He ran towards the cliffs, not knowing where else to go. As soon as he reached Naman’s cave, he told the old man everything, tears running down his cheeks though he didn’t know why. “You’d better hide, my lad,” said the old man, “My tunnel, in the back of the cave is a good place. None will find it.” He led Mordred to the back of the dark cave and withdrew a stone that covered a tunnel that led to the shore. “Hide here for now. You can keep the stone partly open for air. If anyone comes up here in search of, you pull it shut.” Just then cries and shouts came up from the village. “Here they come. If they come up here remember to pull it shut!”
Naman went back to his pot over the fire. Soon a band of men made their appearance at the cave, shouting for the revenge for Polydore against the “Sea’s brat.” “Where have you hidden the murderer?” Shouted one of them who acted as their spokesman. The men looked fierce and strange against the light coming through the cave’s opening to Mordred, who had not completely pulled back the stone as he had been told. Naman made some low answer that Mordred could not hear, but the men were obviously displeased with it. “If you can’t tell us where the murderer is, then we’ll just have done with you so that you can’t cause any more harm in our village!” The speech was delivered with a heavy blow on the old mans head. Mordred watched with horror as the men brutally beat the old man to death with their fists and heavy clubs. After a minute they subsided and the leader spoke. “Lets search the back of the cave. He must be hidden back there somewhere, because he was seen entering by my son.” The sound of heavy footfalls came and Mordred saw the silhouetted feet and legs of the men move quickly as they rushed towards the back of the cave where he was hidden. Something seemed to stop him from closing the opening. Fear and horror of what he had seen done; or guilt of the deaths of two innocent old men that he had caused. He knew not and the men were almost upon him before he snapped the stone into place. But to late, for as he rushed down the dark passage he heard one of the men shout, “There he goes through the wall. Hey man, light a torch!” |
Thursday 21 August 2008 - Untitled Comment
So, it is a fanitisy right?
You have a very great writing style, you manage to turn things that would normally be boring into interesting parts! I like how you gave an over view of Mordred's childhood without making it boring and dull. It was interesting, fast, and gave plenty of detail!
May your pen ever be sharp, C.S. Lewis