Tuesday 19 August 2008

The Book of Mordred part 2

 

   Part 2

Old  Polydore  brought  the  boy  home  to  his  wife  who  shared  in  her  husband’s  great  joy  in  the  lad. They  called  him  Mordred,  the  luck-child  of  the  village,  and  all  the  fisher-women  doted  upon  him. But  as  he  grew  older,  and  shunned  their  company,  the  women  began  to  say  he  was  ill-favored  and  feisty. The  older  he  got  the  more  disliked  other  people,  especially  the  other  children  that  were  his  age. He  even  ignored  his  adapted  parents  as  much  as  he  could. It  soon  became  apparent  that  he  had  only  one  friend  in  the  whole  world:  Naman. His  parents  were  even  more  distressed  by  this,  for  they  thought  it  was  the  friendship  with  Naman  that  made  Mordred  so  unfriendly. And  also  what  parent  would  want  their  son  to  be  friends  with  a  wizard? One  day  ten-year  old  Mordred  sat  on  a  stool  up  high  in  the  opening  of  Naman’s  cave,  overlooking  the  little  fishing  village. Naman  stood  a  bit  farther  in  stirring  a  pot  of  soup  that  hung  over  the  open  fire. “Who  were  my  real  parents,  Naman?”

   “I  don’t  know  my  boy.”

   “Are  you  really  a  wizard  like  the  fishers  say,  or  is  it  one  of  there  usual  lies?”

   “I’m  not  a   wizard. But  I  am  a  descendent  of  the  druids. The  people  down  there  remember  that  and  in  their  minds  I  have  been  twisted  into  a  wizard.”

   “You  are  a  druid,  Naman?”

“I’m  not,  myself,  but   my  ancestors  were. There  are  few  druids  left,  but  those  few  are  still  important  forces  in  Logres. The  great  Merlin  himself  was  a  druid.”

    “Will  you  tell  me  a  story,  Naman?”

    “How  about  the  tale  of  old  King  Lear,  who  was  king  of  Logres  long  before  the  coming  of  the  Roman  invaders  or  the  Saxon  raiders?”

    “Yes,  yes! I  love  that  story! It  is  so  sad  and  yet  so  real. Many  of  your  others  do  not  always  seem  so  real. They  always  have  happy  endings.”

    “Alright. Once,  a  thousand  years  ago  lived  the  good  King  Lear. He  had  three  daughters….”

    It  would  have  been  an  odd  sight  if  any  stranger  had  come  upon  them. The  thin,  gray  bearded,  old  man  bending  over  the  fire  stirring  his  soup  with  a  long  pole  and  the  small  dark  haired  boy  sitting  on  stool  listening  to  him  tell  his  tale. Not  the  usual  picture  of  an  evil  necromancer. Mordred  spent  all  his  free  time  thus  until  he  was   twelve  years  old. Though  he  was  very  friendly  and  tame  when  with  Naman,  he  always  avoided  speaking  to  anyone  else  even  old  Polydore  and  his  wife. The  village  boys,  once  they  found  that  Mordred  shunned  their  company,  teased  and  baited  him  without  mercy  whenever  they  got  the  chance. One  evening,  as  Mordred  was  coming  down  from  Naman’s  cave,  after  sharing  supper  with  the  old  man,  they  made  at  him  with  sticks  and  stones  and  one  or  two  threw  buckets  of  water  on  him. Mordred  turned  on  them  furiously,  and  being  bigger  and  stronger  than  they,  beat  them  back  with  his  fists. Several  of  the  boys  were  badly  hurt  and  they  retreated,  letting  Mordred  continue  his  way  home  in  peace. That  night  Mordred  and  Polydore  went  out  fishing  and  Polydore  did  not  hear  of  the  encounter  until  the  morning. While  Polydore  was  eating  his  breakfast  after  taking  a  short  sleep,  several  of  the  fishermen  came  to  him  complaining  of  their  sons  injuries. They  demanded  that  they  keep  Mordred  away  from  that  “evil  enchanter”  who  they  claimed  had  egged  Mordred  into  attacking  their  boys. So  after  breakfast,  while  he  and  Mordred  were  outside  their  hut  mending  nets,  he  told  Mordred  that  he  must  not  go  to  visit  Naman  anymore. Mordred  made  no  answer,  but  as  soon  as  the  nets  were  repaired,  he  got  up  to  go  to  Naman’s  as  usual. As  he  started  away,  Polydore  leapt  up  angrily  and  seized  him  by  the  shoulders  and  shook  him. Mordred  turned  around,  furious,  and  struck  him  a  hard  blow  in  the  head. But  it  was  harder  than  he  intended,  for  he  didn’t  know  his  strength. Polydore  reeled  backward  and  fell  like  stone. Mordred  kneeled  over  him. He  was  dead. Mordred  stood  up  and  looked  around. A  small  was  running  towards  one  of  the  houses,  screaming. The  chase  would  be  on  in  a  minute. He  ran  towards  the  cliffs,  not  knowing  where  else  to  go. As   soon  as  he  reached  Naman’s  cave,  he  told  the  old  man  everything,  tears  running  down  his  cheeks  though  he  didn’t  know  why. “You’d  better  hide,  my  lad,”  said  the  old  man, “My  tunnel,  in  the  back  of  the  cave  is  a  good  place. None  will  find  it.” He  led  Mordred  to  the  back  of  the  dark  cave  and  withdrew  a  stone  that  covered  a  tunnel  that  led  to  the  shore. “Hide  here  for  now. You  can  keep   the  stone  partly  open  for  air. If  anyone  comes  up  here  in  search  of,  you  pull  it  shut.” Just  then  cries  and  shouts  came  up  from  the  village. “Here  they  come. If  they  come  up  here  remember  to  pull  it  shut!”

    Naman  went  back  to  his  pot  over  the  fire. Soon  a  band  of  men  made  their  appearance  at  the  cave,  shouting  for  the  revenge  for  Polydore  against  the  “Sea’s  brat.” “Where  have  you  hidden  the  murderer?” Shouted  one  of  them  who  acted  as  their  spokesman. The  men  looked  fierce  and  strange  against  the  light  coming  through  the  cave’s  opening  to  Mordred,  who  had  not  completely  pulled  back  the  stone  as  he   had  been  told. Naman  made  some  low  answer  that  Mordred  could  not  hear,  but  the  men  were  obviously  displeased  with  it. “If  you  can’t  tell  us  where  the  murderer  is,  then  we’ll  just  have  done  with  you  so  that  you  can’t  cause  any  more  harm  in  our  village!” The  speech  was  delivered  with  a  heavy  blow  on  the  old  mans  head. Mordred  watched  with  horror  as  the  men  brutally  beat  the  old  man  to  death  with  their  fists  and  heavy  clubs. After  a  minute  they  subsided  and  the  leader  spoke. “Lets  search  the  back  of  the  cave. He  must  be  hidden  back  there  somewhere,  because  he  was  seen  entering  by  my  son.” The  sound  of  heavy  footfalls  came  and  Mordred  saw  the  silhouetted  feet  and  legs  of  the  men  move  quickly  as  they  rushed  towards  the  back  of  the  cave  where  he  was  hidden. Something  seemed  to  stop  him  from  closing  the  opening. Fear  and  horror  of  what  he  had  seen  done;  or  guilt  of  the  deaths  of  two  innocent  old  men  that  he  had  caused. He  knew  not  and  the  men  were  almost  upon  him  before  he  snapped  the  stone  into  place. But  to  late,  for  as  he  rushed  down  the  dark  passage  he  heard  one  of  the  men  shout, “There  he  goes  through  the  wall. Hey  man,  light  a  torch!”

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Thursday 21 August 2008 - Untitled Comment

Oh that was great! Though sad! You HAVE to post more soon!
So, it is a fanitisy right?
You have a very great writing style, you manage to turn things that would normally be boring into interesting parts! I like how you gave an over view of Mordred's childhood without making it boring and dull. It was interesting, fast, and gave plenty of detail!
May your pen ever be sharp, C.S. Lewis
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