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Jun. 4, 2008

Snickerdoodles

I really was planning to post the next chapter this time, but I feel too lazy to go and get it. Sorry. Maybe next time. Don't worry, you'll get it! I promise!

Ugh, I hate this background. It's not at all me, and it's expressionless. I really need to find something new. I'll work on that in a minute, but I don't have much time. This post will probably be shorter than most of my others for that reason.

Thank you all for you concern. I got over the block, and after I got over I found out why it was so hard. Most of my blocks are made of wood, this one however was solid concrete! Ow! But the worst is, for now, over.

Mom and I are kind of making snickerdoodles together. Kind of because I'm on the computer now, but I'll be back in a minute. I love snickerdoodles! Conner says they taste funny (picky). I think he's just out to critisize something lately though. I don't know. Boys will be boys. Just watch him grab 2 warm ones when they've cooled enough to not burn the fire out of his mouth. Haha!

Speaking of warm cookies, the next batch is needing to come out of the oven now. See ya!

~Aster~

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May. 1, 2008

Do you know what I mean?

Ah, of course you don't. No one does. I'm kinda hard to understand sometimes. Especially when I have half of my conversations in my head.... I just did it again, didn't I? Oops...

Well, um, yeah. I've had a hit-my-head-on-the-wall kind of block in my story lately. You writers, you know when you let a whole lot of people read your story for a while and then you go back and realize that you completely contradicted yourself in a couple of chapters? Yeah. That kind of feeling. Now don't you go and try to figure out what I've done. It isn't really that obvious, I don't think. Just annoying to the one who's trying to get the story all sorted out. It can easily be altered and coped with. Even played off of.

Well, I've decided to go back to when I dissected those couple of phrases and do some more. Only this time they'll be quotes mostly. From famous people..........................I just had the longest pause. Is that how you spell people? It looks really funny. Maybe it's just me. I really can't tell. Anyway, from famous people, anonymous people, or unknown people. Just random quotes. Really, people can say the most interesting things!

Well, nothing much has been happening here. Except, that is, that I went to an Irish Dance Concert/Festival thing. It was amazing! I don't know any other way to describe it, but Irish music is alive. It doesn't just sit there or float around or beat into your skull like other music. It gets into your brain and your blood. It influences your inner being and transforms your mind from something tranquil and reasonable to something full of instinct and passion. Something full of life. You'll want to move. You'll want to run. You'll want to fly. Anything but sit still. Unbearable torture to remain still.

Ok, now that I've created a longing in you for Irish music, I'm going to administer cruel and unusual punishment (for no given reason) and leave you to suffer. Adios!

~Aster~

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Apr. 3, 2008

Hallo allerseits!!!

That's German for, "Hello, eveybody!" I didn't exactly want to write this so soon, seeing as how so few people have read my last chapter, but I thought hey, is I say something about it, they may go back and look at it if they care to. So, if you don't want to have a gap in your brain, go back and read that chapter. Even if you don't mind a gap in your brain, go read it. Humor me. I really like advise. Which means at the moment Kayla and AuthorElf are my best friends. (Because they've given advise.) You guys rock!

Cassy's back!! Look at this, everyone! Cassy's back! She has un-abandoned us! Huzzah! (I think she has every Enya song projectplaylist has on her blog too! Wow!) Now everyone go and give her a hard slap for leaving then give her a big bear hug for coming back! Love you, girl!

Ah, the wind is blowing. It's so lovely. The sound it makes in the trees is just glorious. Oh, not so glorious as I had thought. It was just announcing the arrival of rain. I like rain, but now I'll have to close the window. Darn. Oh well, I'll sleep well tonight! I like sleeping to rain. It's comforting.

Hmm. I just looked down. My sense of duty and responsibility are telling me that I need to study my drivers manual (which is waht was there when I looked down). Bye!

~Aster~

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Mar. 27, 2008

Chapter 8

Minor note here before I start. Mom got me the drver's book and they're going to take me to take the test for my permit in 2 weeks. Yipes!!! Aren't they rushing this?? They said, "You're turning 16 in 2 months. It's about time you learned to drive!" Aaahh!!!

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                “No!” came the shout from behind the closed door. “I must speak with Bian personally!” More muted voices followed along with another stream of protests. Finally, as Bian had known would happen, the door opened and his sentry entered.

                “My lord,” he said, “there is a man here asking if you will grant him audience.” He looked back over his shoulder. “He says it’s urgent.”

                Bian barely acknowledged the man as he freed one hand from his leg of ham to wave admittance. The sentry nodded and let the eager man behind him pass through. Then Bian looked up. The man was a soldier from his infantry. He probably was coming with news about the raging and unexpected battle ensuing in the Gespenst Mountains against Imre. It had been all too easy to start the confrontation. Bian already had spies watching places near where they suspected Imre to be, and the Finsters knew he was there. All Bian had to do was push a little, poke a little pressure point, and it was on.

                “Well,” Bian prompted, “speak if you have a tongue. Otherwise leave me in peace.”

                The travel-worn soldier needed no further permission. “I come with news from Kapitän Karl. He sends me to tell you that the Finsters have beaten us back. If we are to succeed, we’ll need reinforcements.”

                A mirth-filled chuckle rolled from across the table where Bian sat. He whipped his head around to his advisor with a glare. “You find something amusing, Geert?” he asked.

                Geert shrugged indifferently and picked at the bright flesh of an apple. The grin didn’t leave his face. “I told you that the Finsters were more than what they seemed. You underestimated them.”

                Bian contained the anger welling up inside of him. He had no argument. Cracking the bone in his hand in half, he turned back to the messenger. “Has Imre himself engaged in the fighting since my visit?”

                “Yes my lord, but only a few times.” The man’s eyes glimmered now with reluctant admiration of his enemy. “He is an amazing swordsman, sometimes fighting with two swords at once.”

He needn’t have told Bian this. Bian had been to the rocky crag in the mountainside where Imre took his stand. He had seen the young man in battle. It was an interesting if not impressive sight. His techniques reflected the limited training Bian knew he had gotten from his parents, the quirks of the Finsters, and strange motions that made planning defense against him difficult. He had a style of his own. Bian had seen Imre several times before in the younger man’s childhood, and a small number of times since. He remembered clearly his trip to his small army’s encampment two weeks before when he had looked up out of his carriage and seen Imre standing alone on the rocks. Bian had almost called a halt. Imre had stood, his long, yellow hair waving in the frolicking wind, glowering at his adversary. The short sword in his hand had remained idle. His face, Bian huffed as he remembered, had been searching and curious with the ever present touch of madness that Bian knew he was responsible for placing there.

“You shall have your reinforcements. Tell Leonard down below. He’ll have people sent within three days.” The messenger bowed gratefully and left the room in a hurry.

When he was gone, Bian dropped his meat on his plate forcefully. Geert’s mouth twitched as Bian stood. “Lost your appetite?” he taunted.

Bian shook his head disdainfully. “You are my ultimate thorn,” he growled.

Geert tossed his apple up into the air and caught it again as it fell. He stood and followed Bian out into the garden. When Bian stopped in front of him, gazing into the depth of a black rose, Geert halted, rubbing the taut flesh of his fruit softly. Bian spoke quietly.

“The metall shipment hasn’t come in yet from last month, and there are complaints from the overseers. The Feuer are becoming rebellious,” said Bian quietly.

Geert frowned. This was his area of proficiency. He managed the income from the metall mines. “How do you know this?” he asked.

Bian reached into a deep pocket of his clothing and pulled out a piece of thick paper. “The reports. They came in this morning.”

Geert snatched the paper from Bian. “Those are supposed to come directly to me! You keep out of this project, Bian. You agreed to let me handle this!”

Bian plucked the rose and whirled around. “No, I wont!” he shouted. “You seem to forget, repeatedly, that you work for me. You are not equal to me, nor do I dangle under your command.” He threw the flower at Geert’s feet and stomped on it. “I agreed to let you have control of the metall shipments and storage. It doesn’t mean that I can’t check up on you every now and then.” He moved in closer to the other man’s face. “I’ve done my research. Every shipping in the last few months has reported fifteen percent more metall than what has been put in storage for those months. Where is it?”

Geert was silent and breathed deeply once. He stared into Bian’s eyes and tried to hide a troubled look. Bian nodded. Placing his first two fingers in the small crevice beneath Geert’s throat, he stated menacingly, “One way or another I will find the metall. If you have anything to do with its disappearance, it would be best for you to come to me with it. Because if I find out by myself that you’re involved,” Bian paused and stood up straight. Without finishing his sentence, he said, “I don’t take kindly to traitors.” Bian shook his head and started walking away.

Geert, highly discomposed, reached up to his temple then looked at his slick fingers. Sweating? He dug his fingernails into the flawless flesh of his apple and let out a groan. He wheeled around. Bian was still walking. His head was bowed and his shoulders thrust forward in meditative thought. He had had a lot on his mind lately. It would be very bad to try and lie to him.  “I know where it is,” Geert said a little too loud.

Bian stopped and turned with a puckered brow. Geert heaved a breath. “I – I’ve been conducting experiments with the substance. The things it can be used for are astounding. The Försters have no idea! It’s an advantage we can use against them.”

Bian glared, skeptical. “Then why didn’t you told me about this sooner?” he asked.

“I was going to tell you,” Geert said after an unconvincing hesitation. “I was waiting until I was sure about my hypothesis. I finished the construction only yesterday. I was looking for an opportunity to test it.”

“I want to see this construction.”

Geert grimaced. “I can arrange for your visit first thing next week when –”

“Tomorrow,” interrupted Bian. “I will see it tomorrow. Is there a problem with that?”

Geert took a deep, shuddering breath. “No problem.”

“Good. Tomorrow then.” The corrupt lord advanced toward the door of his palace and didn’t look back at his cringing advisor.

Geert actually stared after Bian until the door blocked his view. Muttering curses under his breath, he looked down at the apple that was still in his hand. The five fresh nail marks gave it a maimed and sad look. He curled his lip at the abused fruit and, with his full force, launched it across the garden. Geert stormed off to make such preparations as he could for the following morning, not bothering to watch where his rejected apple fell.

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Mar. 20, 2008

Expect it Soon

It being the next chapter of Theron, you will understand. Yeah, I'm almost ready for you to see it. I just need to go over it one more time. I figured that the Indian was right and I did need to tell a little more of this from the bad guy's side. If you're a writer, like I know several of you are, you know that writing a story can get a little hectic. There are the story ideas that you get that are great for an extention of the story you're working on, the ideas that would be great but just clog your mind, the ideas that would be great in a totally different story, and the ideas that will never get put into writing for one reason or another. I have a few of each. Several new mind developments have come to me actually. I'm having difficulty with a little bit of it. I'll ask for some help in a little while, when I get closer to when it'll be relevant.

Yes, Maldor is a quarter horse. I'm sorry I didn't answer you straight when you asked. I didn't have my head screwed on straight. Yes, yes he is. And while we're on the subject of horses, I'll let you know what Mamma named her horsey. She named her Clara. It was a dissappointment to me when I heard, but it's growing on me. I was just going, "Come on! Clara??" But Mom likes it, so it's all right for me. It's not like "Maldor" is completely unquestionable either, I suppose.

Well, I'd better skip off and reread that chapter for you all before you get too restless. Later!

~Aster~

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Feb. 22, 2008

Everything in the world to say, not enough words to say them with!

Thanks, Kayla, for catching that typo. I was skeptical at first, but I went back and saw that you were right! and then I was thankful. Feel free to comment or criticize my work at will. I don't mind. I'll fix the typo when I think about it next.

OMG, we got my momma a new horse!!! Like I told you, we got it! She's a palimino mare, three years old, and boy is she beautiful!! Mom's knees gave out, and I thought she was going to faint. She was speechless! Eli had to catch her. (Ok, I didn't tell you. I have an older brother too. Eli. He's in college now, so he hasn't come into my blog because he hasn't done anything interesting. Don't shoot me.) (Yes, he's very good looking. (Just thought I'd throw that in! LOL!)) Mom looked at her with a little shining light in her eyes. Then she looked at dad with a look that I interpreted as the "Can we really afford that?" look. Dad just grinned a really big grin that reminded me of a really happy five year old. Lol! She doesn't have a name just yet, but mom will come up with something pretty soon, I'm sure. :)

Uh, well, I think I had something else to say, but I forgotted what it was. Oh well. I'll just talk to you all next time. Bye!

~Aster~

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Feb. 14, 2008

Chapter 7

"Always a pleasure to serve my most noble compatriats," she said with a impish grin. Lol!

The final parting of Nanda and Tallah was just as Nanda had thought it would be. Tallah shed but two tears, and she tried hid those from him. She never wanted him to know how much she worried about him.

                As Theron and Aberle passed the great waterfall that had for years concealed Theron’s hiding place, Nanda couldn’t control a chuckle. He never could. It was always so funny to him that a large, stone wall and a waterfall could keep Bian from finding him, but he was grateful for it. However, he knew that Bian’s people prowled around this place a lot, and that they could even now be near. So he said to Aberle, “Keep a watchful eye. This spot here, just outside the trees, is heavily watched by my enemies. If you see anyone, please do not hesitate to shoot them.”

                “You seem very unfortunate in your enemies,” Aberle said in return. “It appears that you have many.”

                “As far as I know, I only have one, but he has many people beneath him. In his threats, he claims to be strong in Deutsh and able to eliminate me easily.”

                “Oh? And who is this man?”

                “I imagine that his promises are all lies. I’ve never seen any proof to anything he says. I’ve already told you his name: Bian; but I doubt you have ever heard of him.”

                To Theron’s surprise, Aberle reared up his horse sharply and his back became rigid. The Förster didn’t move for several seconds, and when he did, he let out a long, ragged breath. “I’m such a fool,” he muttered. “Such a blamed fool!” He turned his dark head around so swiftly that his hair swung about majestically. Aberle gazed intently at Theron as he brought his horse to Aktivkohle’s side. “Never heard of him?” he asked. His voice held no note whatsoever of its usual humor. “Are you trying to make fun? I should have realized this before, but do you really think that that’s funny?”

                Theron’s eyebrows rose. “I don’t understand. What do you mean?”

                “I should have put my brain into motion. This could get me into more trouble…” Aberle trailed off in speechless frustration.

                Theron was silent with voiceless confusion. Aberle noted this and chilled his temper reluctantly. He took a deep breath. “Bian,” the Förster explained, “is a major threat to the Försters’ operation. He is considered the only real threat we have! You didn’t know? How could you not? He has half the southern territory under his control!”

Theron was dumbfounded. The thought that his long-term enemy could be the enemy of so many others was a thought too much to absorb at once. This meant that becoming a Förster wouldn’t at once free him from Bian’s terrorism. It might even make it worse.

Aberle wheeled his mount around. “Come,” he said. “We must make haste. We have no time to lose if I am to get you to the Kollegium in one piece.” He bolted off in the direction of the still-rising sun. After a second’s hesitation, Theron followed him, but not without apprehension that tickled his spine.

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Upon arriving at Stadt, a city about forty miles from their starting point, around midnight that night, Aberle led Theron through the dark maze of houses and shops toward a well-structured abode with a single candle in the window. Aberle dismounted and knocked on the door. Theron shifted uncomfortably when there was no answer. Aberle just sighed and knocked again.

This time there was movement heard from within. Aberle stood straighter, contented. The door opened after a few moments to reveal a tall man. Theron took in his profile with curiosity.  His chest was wide, and his sandy hair was bedraggled and un-brushed. With the help of the light from a lantern the man held, Theron saw that he wore an earth-toned tunic and pants of  thin, worn wool. His muscled hands and arms betrayed the fact that he was familiar with the weight of a strong weapon in his hands. Unlike Aberle, this man wore facial hair in the form of a well-checked beard. At first glance, he looked rough but also benign which portrayed one message to Theron: that he was a man who knew responsibility and took care of his own.

The man raised the lantern in order to better see Aberle’s face. Aberle raised his arm to shield his eyes.

“Cut it out, Jarrett!” cried Aberle. “We’ve come to stay the night. Can you accommodate two?”

Jarrett lowered his light hurriedly. “Oh, Aberle! How good to see you.”

“Yes, well, I only hope that we haven’t disturbed your sleep.”

“Naw.” Jarrett stepped aside enough for Nanda and Aberle to see inside his domicile. Behind him, there was a desk hidden under two open scrolls and loose paper besides. An ink well and pen had been put carefully on a corner of the desk not covered with paper. “I was just doing some more of my writing,” said the man. “Who is your companion?”

“His name is Theron,” answered Aberle.

Jarrett nodded and looked at Nanda who dismounted from his horse in order to shake the Förster’s hand. “Good luck with the Kollegium,” said Jarrett.

“Thank you,” returned Theron.

“I’ll take the horses,” said Aberle as he led the animals around the house where, Theron assumed, was a stable.

“Come on in,” said Jarrett ushering Theron inside. Theron saw that there were two beds and wondered where the third would sleep. “There’s a cot under the bed by that wall if you want to get it,” said Jarrett as he rolled up a scroll.

“Of course,” said Nanda. “Where should I put it?” he asked when he had gotten it out.

“Anywhere I won’t get stepped on,” Jarrett chuckled.

“Oh, I can take the cot,” volunteered Nanda. “You don’t have to give up your bed for me.”

Jarrett paused in rolling up the second scroll to glance at Theron. “Listen here, newbie, if you pass your test and become a Förster, you’ll learn to take what kindness is offered to you by your host.”

Nanda sat down on a bed. “Sorry.” Theron watched as Jarrett finished with his scrolls and paced over to a large fireplace with a kettle over it.

“Are you hungry?” asked the big man while dishing out a bowl of stew.

“Yes, thank you,” Theron replied. When Aberle came in from outside there was a warm bowl of stew waiting for him as well. He grabbed it with a nod to Jarrett and began to eat.

Jarrett watched the two of them silently for a time. Nanda expected nothing less. He judged the Förster as a kind of contemplative man. When he did speak again, Jarrett didn’t address Nanda but Aberle.

“You’re stressed, brother. What is the problem?”

Aberle swallowed a hunk of meat. Meat. Oh yes, Kippte needed to eat. “He,” said Aberle, pointing with his spoon. “He is the problem.” Nanda was mildly surprised with the accusation but remained silent. “He’s Bian’s prey; I didn’t realize it until after I should have.”

Jarrett gave Theron a quick and almost accusing look. He let out a low whistle and leaned back a little to fix his gaze on the opposing wall. “The Kollegium will be very pleased with you for bringing him in. You may be commemorated.”

Theron set his jaw. After a slight pause, Aberle said, “But?”

The larger Förster shrugged. “But this could lead to a slight problem. It fixes the problem of looking for him; for that, you will receive their high thanks. However, if Bian learns of his membership –,” Jarrett turned his head toward Nanda, “and now I have no doubt that you will pass your tests – it will make his blows to deflect us more frequent and severe. This may cost lives.”

Nanda stood, “May I get a little more of that food? Please?”

Jarrett’s eyebrows sank a centimeter, but he nodded. As Nanda turned his back to the rangers, he felt a cold wind of admonition settle over them. He tried to ignore them as he dished out two pieces of meat and something green he thought would make Kippte happy. Before he sat down again, he asked, “I dislike being spoken of as some sort of prize to be brought in to a game master. Maybe I should reconsider joining your order.”

Aberle shook his head. “Forgive us, friend. I didn’t mean for it to sound so. It’s just that we’ve been looking for one of you for years, and to find you willing to join us so suddenly is quite surprising.”

“And to find you alone was also a surprise,” added Jarrett.

Theron paused before bringing his pet into view, confused. “But I wasn’t alone. Tallah was there when Aberle got me. And what do you mean ‘one of you’?”

“Why, your brother, of course,” said Aberle.

Nanda dropped his hand to his lap, his pet forgotten.

 

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